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How can I fix my Hypothesis so that it sounds better?Research shows th

How can I fix my Hypothesis so that it sounds better?Research shows that children abused as a child are more likely at developing schizophrenia in later life, compared to a child that never experienced such maltreatment or abuse.My professor stated that (However, your hypothesis needs to be re-stated and also more narrow).Research shows are you doing a comparison of previous published research? or are you proposing a study? If it’s the latter, then you should delete the research shows. that children abused be specific about what kind of abuse (physical, sexual, etc) as a child are more likely at developing are more likely at developing schizophrenia is grammatically incorrect schizophrenia in later life, compared to a child that never experienced such maltreatment or abuse. This last phrase should follow the same format as the beginning phrase.