Revise the attached document. Add the requested information 1.Missing

Revise the attached document. Add the requested information
1.Missing

Revise the attached document. Add the requested information
1.Missing required cited paraphrase (or paraphrases) Clear up
minor formatting of in-text citations (add page or paragraph
number) and the References page. Your paragraphs present much
scientific and medical information that is not in direct quotes.
Much of it is not common knowledge. That all should be cited, cited
paraphrases or summaries. Please add the citations to the sources
in which you found that information.
2.Revise the thesis statement and add a hook to begin the
Introduction. Your conclusion currently lacks a strong wrap-up to
bring closure–please add that. Be sure to cite in text where your
summary/paraphrases end, and cite every source that you list in a
References page
3.The References list should be alphabetized by authors last
names, and evenly double spaced, like the essay. Use hanging
indents. Include the doi or URL.