Need someone to read over my white paper. Was asked to take a position.
It is over Audit committees and fraud risk management.

Need feedback on 
1. did i explain how it is tied to corporate governance and why i feel it is important
2. Is my argument clear- I feel that board should assign risk oversight risk to audit committee.

Need someone who can help me clean up this position paper...from reading, to making suggestion on how I can make it strong.


need someone who can help me strengthen my position paper is fraud risk management. Need feedback and someone to re-read suggested changed. Need back by tomorrow afternoon..have a few days to complete assignment. this is for a corporate governance class.